Wednesday, 13 April 2016

My Narrative

The Blind Man
I was walking when it was burning hot. I saw a blind man sitting alone so I went towards him.  I took him to God and God put his hands on him and the blind man's eyes were free.

BY: Lilly

9 comments:

  1. Hi Lilly,
    I like your narrative about the blind man.
    Keep up the good work!

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  2. Thanks Estelle i'll keep up the good work

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  3. Great Narrative Lilly.
    I like how you added fantastic adjectives.

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  5. hello lilly
    love your work about a blind man keep it up. What made you chose this?
    come to my blog and see what i have been learning so far. dbetts.blogspot.com

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  6. hello lilly
    love your work about a blind man keep it up. What made you chose this?
    come to my blog and see what i have been learning so far. dbetts.blogspot.com

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  7. Kiaora,
    My name is Renee I'm from Kaikohe west school.
    I love love it was short, and awesome adding god was cool too.

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  8. Hi Lily
    My name is Nicole
    I really loved your story It was really short but really amazing. great work keep it up.

    -Nicole

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